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"Thank you for your bettering of my raw proposal. I am really astonished what
you could make out of the original sentences. It sounds more elegant and
professional."
K.K., Autor und Redaktor
Redigieren
Ihre englischen Texte, die
professionell sein müssen, können wir in drei Graden redigieren.
Korrekturlesen: Behebung von Rechtschreibfehlern. Reicht in vielen Fällen
nicht aus!
Redigieren: Wie Korrekturlesen, mit zusätzlicher Stilverbesserung. In der
Regel nötig.
Simplifizieren: Wie Redigieren, jedoch mit dem Stil (nicht Inhalt!)
vereinfacht für Leser von Englisch als Fremdsprache (z.B. Zielgruppe Asien oder
weltweit).
Der Grad des
Redigierens
ist von Ihrem Text
und Ihrer Zielgruppe abhängig
Beispiel
Over the last one and a half years the ITC team an interdisciplinary
working group compromising members of Special Projects, Corporate IT, and
Corporate Controling together with many experts from the Operating companies
and with the support of Bigcorp (Spain) and Bigcorp (Japan) have defined the
uniform reports and the standard tools.
Nach Korrekturlesen:
Over the last one and a half years the ITC team an interdisciplinary
working group comprising members of Special Projects, Corporate IT, and
Corporate Controlling together with many experts from the operating companies,
and with the support of Bigcorp Spain and Bigcorp Japan,
has defined the uniform reports and the standard tools.
Schreibfehler sind behoben, aber der Satz benötigt noch Stilverbesserung
durch Redigieren:
The uniform reports and standard tools of ITC were developed over the
past one and a half years. The work was done by the ITC team an
interdisciplinary working group comprising employees from Special Projects,
Corporate IT, and Corporate Controlling working together with experts from the
operating companies and pilot teams at Bigcorp Spain and Bigcorp Japan.
Mit Simplifizieren ist der Satz noch einfacher zu lesen:
The uniform reports and standard tools of ITC were developed over the
past 18 months. The work was led by the ITC team an interdisciplinary working
group comprising employees from Special Projects, Corporate IT, and Corporate
Controlling. The team worked together with experts from the operating companies
and pilot teams at Bigcorp Spain and Bigcorp Japan.
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